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The information provided in the bar chart is concerning the export incomes in five different countries whereas the table give the proportion of change in value of exports between 2015 and 2016. Overall, it is clearly apparent that is all of majors experienced upward trends. Besides, all earrnings increased except for gems and jewellery which dropped slightly. In terms of bar chart, the two major export earnings were petroleum and engineered products that accounted for highest trades. To be precise, petroleum products reached a peak at around 60 billion, 62 billion from 2015 to 2016, respectively. Engineered goods increased by 8. 5% from 58 billion to approximately 61 billion in the year of 2016. Following that the remainding of categories undergo lower export rates. Gems and jewelery slight decrease in sales to 42 billion that dropping by around 5. 18% in 2016. Agricultural goods were 30 billion in 2015 and had a minimum rise of 0. 81%. A remarkable change is that a significantly increasing of textiles were over 15%, which developed from approximately 25 billion to around 31 billion.
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change
in value of
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that is
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increased
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which dropped
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In terms of bar chart, the two major
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earnings were petroleum and engineered products that accounted for highest trades. To be precise, petroleum products reached a peak at around 60
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, 62
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from 2015 to 2016,
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. Engineered
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goods
increased by 8. 5% from 58
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to approximately 61
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in the year of 2016.

Following that the
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remainding
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rates. Gems and
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jewelery
slight decrease in sales to 42
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billion
that dropping by around 5. 18% in 2016. Agricultural
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goods
were 30
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in 2015 and had a minimum rise of 0. 81%. A remarkable
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change
is that a
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increasing of textiles were over 15%, which developed from approximately 25
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to around 31
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