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The table below show information of sales of fair trade labelled coffee and bananas in 1994 and 2004.

The table below show information of sales of fair trade labelled coffee and bananas in 1994 and 2004. peDEd
The tabular data compares the amount of sales of coffee and banana labeled by fair trade in 1994 and 2004. The units are measured in million euros. Overall, the UK sells the highest amount of coffee regardless of various years and Denmark sells the largest quantity in the former year, while The UK in the final period. It can be clearly seen that the exports of coffee by The UK was 1. 5 in 1999 and it increased significantly to 20 whereas, the amount of coffee sales by Sweden, Belgium, and Denmark was approximately 1% in 1994 and they increased gradually to near 2 million in 5 years. Interestingly, Switzerland sales of coffee were accounted for 3 and the amount doubles in half-decade. Probing further, The highest amount of sales of banana was stated for the UK for 15 in 1994 and 47 in 2004, followed by sales of the same product by Switzerland and Denmark was 1 and 0. 6 and it inclined exponentially to 5. 5 and 4 respectively. Sweden and Belgium sells approximately 2 in the former period and it faced a significant decline to around 1 million in the final year.
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regardless of various years and Denmark sells the largest quantity in the former
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, while The UK in the final period.

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by The UK was 1. 5 in 1999 and it increased
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by Sweden, Belgium, and Denmark was approximately 1% in
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1994 and
they increased
gradually
to near 2 million in 5 years.
Interestingly
, Switzerland
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of
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coffee
were accounted
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doubles in half-decade.

Probing
further
, The highest
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amount
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sales
of banana
was stated
for the UK for 15 in 1994 and 47 in 2004, followed by
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sales
of the same product by Switzerland and Denmark was 1 and 0. 6 and it inclined
exponentially
to 5. 5 and 4
respectively
. Sweden and Belgium sells approximately 2 in the former period and it faced a significant decline to around 1 million in the final
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IELTS academic The table below show information of sales of fair trade labelled coffee and bananas in 1994 and 2004.

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