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The table below represents the average of rainfall in two different cities monthly.

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The table which is given below represents the average of rainfall in two different cities in 12 months of the year, in inches. Woodsville, rainfall of this city starts from 5 and 4 inches in January and February. After these two months the level of rainfall is decreasing steadily in each month from March to July, from 3. 75 inches to 0. 75 inches, respectively. After that its level is going up from August to November as though from 1 inch to 6 inches. At the last month of the year it is only 5. 5 inches. Blacksboro, it is average rainfall starts from 3 inches in January, while the rainfall level is 5 inches in woodville. similar average in February in both cities, rainfall decreasing step by step from 2. 5 inches to 0. 04 inches between March and August in contrast to the above city, it decreases till 1 month more than above. From September to December it is going up untill 2. 5 inches. To sum up, there is no big contrast between these at all. The level of raining is at 6 inches woodsville which is the peak for and for Blacksboro its peak is only 4 inches.
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