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The table below information participate in cultural activities by age.

The table below information participate in cultural activities by age. o65k3
The table chart illustrates the information about joining in cultural activities by various age group. It is immensely clear from the table chart that abinitio step as regards any perfomance are being participated by youngster group to 35%, and 22% adult in any performance is being participated by interested adults along with in same category aged person join significantly by 17%. Instead this, all aged 16 and over any performance being participated by human. Secondly, 11% youngster undertaking any crafts display a significant of 11%, then 17% adults participate in the undertaking any crafts as well 18% old-aged person join to this, after that 19 percentage all aged 16 and over participate in this activity. In terms of cultural purchases 11% of youth join this activity, and cultural purchases is being joint by 17% adults, and 18% aged group join this, after that cultural purchases is being participated through all aged group with 16%. Delving deeper, any vishal art is being participated by youngsters and adults to 30%, and 16% and 11% elders and 15% all aged group took participate in this activity. Moreover, with regards to any writing is participated by youngster and adults with 17% and six percentage and in the same activity is taking part old-aged group with 5% and also 7% of all aged grouo. Lastly, 10% youngster take participate in computer based activity, and also 9% adults. In same activity 5% elders take part and 6% all aged group take participate in this activity. Overall, numerous youngsters took part in any performance with high percentage than the other activities.
The table chart illustrates the information about joining in
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group
to 35%, and 22% adult in any performance is being
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participated
by interested
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adults
along with in same category
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aged
person
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join
significantly
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participated
by human.
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, 11%
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youngster
undertaking any crafts display
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11%, then 17%
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adults
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participate
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as well
18%
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-aged person
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to this, after that 19 percentage all
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aged
16 and over
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activity
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11% of youth
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in computer based
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5% elders
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