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The table below identifies the six foods people from selected European countries demand more often.

The table below identifies the six foods people from selected European countries demand more often. W9KW
the table give the information about the six eating items that people of four different countries prefer frequently. Overall it can be seen that American food is most popular in European countries and least amount of Indian food eating in European countries. To start with in United Kingdom highest loving food is of Chinese and American food is also all most seam eating food by people moreover mexican and Indian cuisine preference by people is similar which is 19 percentage Also France highest consumption by people is local food and Chinese Japanese and American food prefer by people around 24 percentage respectively. In addition of that, Germans people most liking food is America and least loving food is Indian and other people enjoy Chinese and local food it is all most 21 percentage and Spanish people most cravings their own local food more than another cuisine which is 28 percentage.
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IELTS academic The table below identifies the six foods people from selected European countries demand more often.

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3 paragraphs
150 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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