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the table below highlight data on the number of travellers using three major British airport between 1998 and 2003 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

The proportion of travelers who visit three major British airport from 1998 to 2003 is revealed in the table. Overall, Gatwick air terminal became the highest of visitors, and also other terminals are presented an incline with some changes. Initially, Heathrow airport was visited by 27. 2 millions travelers, while there were around 36. 5 millions of visitors in Gatwick air terminal, and this was almost two fold than those stopped in Stansted airport. By 2003, the first and last areas almost experienced proportions, between 45. 6 and 43. 3 millions of tourists. However, the latter one becoming the highest visited by travelers, accounting for around 69. 3 millions. Moreover, If looking in Heathrow airport, the percentage of travelers increased to 48. 2 millions and decreased over two years before hitting the peak at 45. 6% in 2003. Showing an increase in the number of users was revealed in the figure Gatwick air terminal, hovering 69. 3 million travelers at the end. Albeit in the beginning that Stansed airport had the small number, they increased to 43. 3 millions passengers, and this proportion remained stable until the last year.
The proportion of
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travelers
who visit three major British
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airport
from 1998 to 2003
is revealed
in the table.

Overall
, Gatwick air
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terminal
became the highest of visitors, and
also
other
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terminals
are presented
an incline with
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some
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changes
.

Initially
, Heathrow
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airport
was visited
by 27. 2
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millions
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travelers
, while there were around 36. 5
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millions
of visitors in Gatwick air
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terminal
, and this was almost
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two fold
than those
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stopped
in
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Stansted
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airport
. By 2003, the
first
and last areas almost experienced proportions, between 45. 6 and 43. 3
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millions
of tourists.
However
, the latter one becoming the highest visited by
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travelers
, accounting for around 69. 3 millions.

Moreover
, If looking in Heathrow
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airport
, the percentage of
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travelers
increased to 48. 2
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millions
and decreased over two years
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before
hitting the peak at 45. 6% in 2003. Showing an increase in the number of users
was revealed
in the figure Gatwick air
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terminal
, hovering 69. 3
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million
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travelers
at the
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end
. Albeit in the beginning that
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Stansed
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airport
had the
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small
number, they increased to 43. 3
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millions
passengers, and this proportion remained stable until the last year.
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IELTS academic the table below highlight data on the number of travellers using three major British airport between 1998 and 2003

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