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The graphs illustrate the population of various age groups in Yemen and Italy in 2000 and the pre-estimate of 2050. Looking at Yemen in 2000, children and adolescent takes the largest part, over half of the population. The working-age group ranked immediately second to the former group, took account for 46. 3%, the remaining left for the elderly group(3. 6%). Regarding Italy, the 10-14years group occupied the smallest pie(14. 3%), approximately a quarter were older adults (24. 1%), 15-59 years holds excess two-thirds of the whole. Over a half-century, in Yemen, the decreased percentage of young children is the same as the increased proportion of 15-59 years age group, respectively reached 57. 3% and 37. 0%. The percentage of older people raised by 1. 2%. In Italy, the proportion of the over 60 years group(42. 3%) almost identical to the 15-59 years group(46. 2%). A slight drop happened among the young children group. Overall, both nationals have a lower birth rate, whereas more obviously is the higher elder rate in Italy.

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 in Yemen and Italy in 2000 and the pre-estimate of 2050. Looking at Yemen in 2000, children and adolescent takes the largest part, over half of the population. The working-age You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbodycrowdfactionclubcompanyband
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 ranked immediately second to the former You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbodycrowdfactionclubcompanyband
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. 6%). Regarding Italy, the 10-14years You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbodycrowdfactionclubcompanyband
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 occupied the smallest pie(14. 3%), approximately a quarter were older adults (24. 1%), 15-59 years holds excess two-thirds of the whole. Over a half-century, in Yemen, the decreased percentage of young children is the same as the increased proportion of 15-59 years age You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbodycrowdfactionclubcompanyband
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, respectively
 reached 57. 3% and 37. 0%. The percentage of older This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
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 raised by 1. 2%. In Italy, the proportion of the over 60 years You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbodycrowdfactionclubcompanyband
group(42
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almost identical to the 15-59 years You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbodycrowdfactionclubcompanyband
group(46
. 2%). A slight drop happened among the young children You use this word too often, consider replacing it withbodycrowdfactionclubcompanyband
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. Overall
, both nationals have a lower birth rate, whereas more obviously
 is the higher elder rate in Italy. 