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the table below gives the information about the comsumer expediture in five diffrent country in 2002. Reported it by selected and compare

the table below gives the information about the comsumer expediture in five diffrent country in 2002. Reported it by selected and compare gA2XL
The given table represents the consumption rate by percentage of three different categogies in five countries Ireland, Spain, Italy, Sweeden and Turkey in the year 2002. Overall, it is clear from the figure that consumer expenditure on foods, drinks and tobacco is higher than two other categories in all the given countries. On the other hand, the leisure and education category has the lowest proportion of the national user. What stand out in the first collumn is when Turkey’s comsumer are whom expended the major of foods, drinks and tobacco with 32. 14% of the expediture, the consumptive figure of Swedeen is the lowest in the five nations (15. 77%). The following collumn illustrates the percentage user of clothing and footwear items. It is clearly that the Italian comsumer percentage stand for 9 % which is considered the highest amount of all, on the constrast Sweeden has the fewest amount of people using clothing and footwear, only 5, 4%. And last but not least, it is noticable from the last collumn that the proportion of Turkian spending on education and leisure presents 4, 35% which is twice as much as that of Spain (1, 98%). This is the end of my report
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table represents the consumption rate by percentage of three
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categogies
in five

countries Ireland, Spain, Italy,
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Sweeden
and Turkey in the year 2002.

Overall
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clear
from the figure that consumer expenditure on foods, drinks and tobacco is higher

than two other categories in all the
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countries.
On the other hand
, the leisure and education

category has the lowest proportion of the national user.

What
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stand
out in the
first
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collumn
is when Turkey’s
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comsumer
are
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whom
expended the major of

foods, drinks and tobacco with 32. 14% of the
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expediture
, the consumptive figure of
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Swedeen
is the

lowest in the five nations (15. 77%).

The following
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collumn
illustrates the percentage user of clothing and footwear items. It is
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that the Italian
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comsumer
percentage stand for 9 % which
is considered
the highest amount of all,

on the
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constrast
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Sweeden
has the fewest amount of
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using clothing and footwear,
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only
5, 4%.

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not least, it is
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collumn
that the proportion of
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Turkian
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on education and leisure presents 4, 35% which is twice as much as that of Spain (1, 98%).

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