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The charts gives imformation about the way in which water was used in china,india,new zealand and canada in 2000.

The charts gives imformation about the way in which water was used in china, india, new zealand and canada in 2000. O6Y8E
After analyzing, it can clearly seen that, the 70% water was used by agriculture purpose and 22 percentage of water which used by industary. afterthat, only 8%of water for domestic in 2000. further imformation laccate of the water used by china in 69 of percentium by agriculture in 2000. India was the country which water was used by most of. only industary was less 12% in canada. In contrast, industary and domestic was the countary which proportion was almost indentified. In new zealand water was used by same about agriculture and domestic. moreover, domestic and industary both are almost samenin india which was 5 and 3 percentage.
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IELTS academic The charts gives imformation about the way in which water was used in china, india, new zealand and canada in 2000.

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