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The table below gives the average time spent and distance travelled by UK commuters in one year.

The table below gives the average time spent and distance travelled by UK commuters in one year. ABPb1
The table illustrates the travellers, who travelled the average distance and how much time require to that distance covered by several regions of the UK in a year. The data of the time and distance are presents in minutes and miles. Overall, it can be seen that the longest distance and major time spent by the South East, however the Wales was covered shortest distance in few minutes. The London, Yorkshire and Humberside, and Wales were covered 14 miles and all those regions had same distance but took time different 54, 36 and 27 minutes respectively. Moreover, the Northern Ireland, East Anglia and East Midland were commuted average distance, 15 miles and which spent a time just over half past. The South West took a same time but that travelled more 1miles. Furthermore, the West Midland and North West were covered 18 miles and North East and Scotland were covered 19 miles, while all of those spent time under 45 minutes, despite those North East spent 32 minutes. Finally, the South Eastern people had travelled 20 miles during 1hour and 18 minutes.
The table illustrates the
travellers
, who travelled the average
distance
and how much
time
require to that
distance
covered
by several regions of the UK in a year. The data of the
time
and
distance
are presents in minutes and miles.

Overall
, it can be
seen
that the longest
distance
and major
time
spent
by the South East,
however
the Wales was
covered
shortest
distance
in few minutes.

The London, Yorkshire and
Humberside
, and Wales were
covered
14 miles
and all those regions had same
distance
but
took
time
different
54, 36 and 27 minutes
respectively
.
Moreover
, the Northern Ireland, East Anglia and East Midland
were commuted
average
distance
,
15 miles
and which
spent
a
time
just
over half past. The South West took a same
time
but
that travelled more
1miles
.

Furthermore
, the West Midland and North West were
covered
18 miles
and North East and Scotland were
covered
19 miles
, while all of those
spent
time
under 45 minutes, despite those North East
spent
32 minutes.
Finally
, the South Eastern
people
had travelled
20 miles
during 1hour and 18 minutes.
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IELTS academic The table below gives the average time spent and distance travelled by UK commuters in one year.

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