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The table below gives information on households with a regular use of a car in Great Britain from 1971 to 2007. v.2

The table below gives information on households with a regular use of a car in Great Britain from 1971 to 2007. v. 2
The line graph illustrates the number of cars used by per household in Great Britain over a period of 36 years. Overall, it is evident that the percentage of households owning a car was the highest and the figure for households having more than two cars was the lowest from 1971 to 2007. By 1971, around 45 percent of households possessing a car, whereas only approximately 2 percent of families having more than two cars. The proportion of hoseholds with a regular use of a car fluctuated between 43 and 46 percent throughout a 36-year period. The figure for families owning three or more slightly increase to about 7 percent in 2007. The percentage of households without a car in 1991 was approximately a half compared to in 1971. This figure significantly declined to around 25 percent in 2007. In contrast, the percentage of two-cars families was just under 10 percent in 1971, but to 2007 it reached about 26 percent.
The line graph illustrates the number of
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cars
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by per
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household
in Great Britain over a period of 36 years.
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, it is evident that the percentage of
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households
owning a
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car
was the highest and the figure for
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households
having more than two
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cars
was the lowest from 1971 to 2007.

By 1971, around 45
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percent
of
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households
possessing a
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car
, whereas
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only
approximately 2
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percent
of families having more than two
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cars
. The proportion of
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hoseholds
with a regular
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use
of a
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car
fluctuated between 43 and 46
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percent
throughout a 36-year period. The figure for families owning three or more
slightly
increase to about 7
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percent
in 2007.

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The
percentage of
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households
without a
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car
in 1991 was approximately a half compared to in 1971. This figure
significantly
declined to around 25
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percent
in 2007.
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, the percentage of two-cars families was
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under 10
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in 1971,
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to 2007 it reached about 26
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.
2Linking words, meeting the goal of 7 or more
19Repeated words, meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
2Mistakes
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IELTS academic The table below gives information on households with a regular use of a car in Great Britain from 1971 to 2007. v. 2

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3 paragraphs
161 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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