Do you want to improve your writing? Try our new evaluation service and get detailed feedback.
Check Your Text it's free

The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002.

The given table depicts the relative expenses made by the people of Ireland, Italy, Spain, Sweden and Turkey on essential products and services in 2002. Overall, it is clear that residents of the listed nations spent more on food, drink and tobacco and less on the other product categories. In comparison to the others, the Turks spent the most on food, drink and tobacco and leisure/education, while the Italians spent the most on clothing and footwear. In the Year 2000 people of Turkey allocated almost a third of their total expenditure towards Food, Drink and Tobacco, which was followed by the people of Ireland where the expenses on this category accounted for almost 29%. The remaining countries in the list spent between 15-19% only. On the other hand the expenses made on other two categories were far less. Italians, to begin with, parted with 9% of their total expenditure on clothing and footwear, while in Ireland, Spain and Turkey the expenses were in the range of 6. 5%. The Swedish spent the least on this (5. 5%). Finally for Leisure and Education the Turks spent slightly more than 4%, while the remaining nations parked less than 4% of their total expenses.
The
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
given
table depicts the relative expenses made by the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
of Ireland, Italy, Spain, Sweden and Turkey on essential products and services in 2002.

Overall
, it is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
clear
that residents of the listed nations
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
spent
more on food, drink and tobacco and less on the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
other
product categories.
In comparison
to the others, the Turks
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
spent
the most on food, drink and tobacco and leisure/education, while the Italians
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
spent
the most on clothing and footwear.

In the Year 2000
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
of Turkey allocated almost a third of their total expenditure towards Food, Drink and Tobacco, which
was followed
by the
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
of Ireland where the expenses on this category accounted for almost 29%. The remaining countries in the list
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
spent
between 15-19%
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
.

On the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
other
hand the expenses made on
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
other
two categories were far less. Italians, to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
begin


This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
with
, parted with 9% of their total expenditure on clothing and footwear, while in Ireland, Spain and Turkey the expenses were in the range of 6. 5%. The Swedish
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
spent
the least on this (5. 5%).
Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Finally
for Leisure and Education the Turks
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
spent
slightly
more than 4%, while the remaining nations parked less than 4% of their total expenses.
What do you think?
  • This is funny writingFunny
  • I love this writingLove
  • This writing has blown my mindWow
  • It made me angryAngry
  • It made me sadSad

IELTS academic The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002.

Academic
  American English
5 paragraphs
201 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
  • ?
    One main idea per paragraph
  • ?
    Include an introduction and conclusion
  • ?
    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
  • ?
    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
  • ?
    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
  • ?
    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
Labels Descriptions
  • ?
    Currently is not available
  • Meet the criteria
  • Doesn't meet the criteria
Recent posts





Get more results for topic:
  • The table below gives information on consumer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002.