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The bar chart comperes the number of prisoner in five different countries from 1930 to 1980.

The bar chart comperes the number of prisoner in five different countries from 1930 to 1980. Overall, amongst the five countries the most significant change in the number of prisoners occurred between Australia and Amerika after sixty years. The Unitet states had been 140% in 1980 years and of course Unitet state diffirent over year and in 1970 year a significant majority and one year ago it had been 150 % namely in 1960 it moderate than others as well as in 1950years Amerika had been marginal 170% sure it was good than other countries such as Australia changeable the height number more than half namely in 1970 years and the very small degree in 1940 farther it had been almost a half and Australia rised slightly than 1950 and to 1930.
The bar chart
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comperes
the number of prisoner in five
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different
countries from 1930 to 1980.

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, amongst the five countries the most significant
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change
in the number of prisoners occurred between Australia and
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Amerika
after sixty years.

The
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Unitet
states had been 140% in 1980 years and
of course
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Unitet
state
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diffirent
over
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year
and in 1970
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year
a significant majority and one
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year
ago it had been 150 %
namely
in 1960 it
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moderate
than others
as well
as in 1950years
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Amerika
had been marginal 170% sure it was
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good
than other countries such as Australia changeable the height number more than half
namely
in 1970 years and the
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very
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small
degree in 1940 farther it had been almost a half and Australia
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rised
slightly
than 1950 and to 1930.
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IELTS academic The bar chart comperes the number of prisoner in five different countries from 1930 to 1980.

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
132 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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