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Chorleywood is a village near London whose population has increased steadily since the middle of the nineteenth century. The map belows shows the development of the village.

The picture illustrates, the improvement of a village named Chorley which is located nar London and residents number are consistenlty increasing. Overall, there are significant development in Chorley specifically in trasportation area. The map shows, in 1868 only main roads are available in access. We can easily recognize that the golden era of infrastructures started in 1909 when the railway started. On the same decade Charleywood station was built near the Chorleywood Park and Golf course that is located center of the village. Conversely, while most of the village is stating to develop both upper and mid left of the village are both empty. the development, focused on the area near to gulf park
The picture illustrates, the improvement of a village named
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Chorley
which
is located
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nar
London and residents number are
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consistenlty
increasing.
Overall
, there are significant development in
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Chorley
specifically
in
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trasportation
area.

The map
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, in 1868
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only
main roads are available in access. We can
easily
recognize that the golden era of infrastructures
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started
in 1909 when the railway
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started
. On the same decade
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Charleywood
station
was built
near the
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Chorleywood
Park and Golf course that
is located
center of the village.

Conversely
, while most of the village is stating to develop both upper and mid
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left
of the village are both empty.
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the
development, focused on the area near to gulf
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park
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IELTS academic Chorleywood is a village near London whose population has increased steadily since the middle of the nineteenth century. The map belows shows the development of the village.

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  American English
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113 words
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5.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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