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The bar graph below shows the amount of carbon emissions in different countries in 2012.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and maje comparisons where relevant.

The vertical bar graph illustrates the number of carbon emission in six countries namely China, USA, India, Russia, Japan and Germany in 2012. The data is given in metric tonnes. Overall, the highest carbon was emmited by China while the lowest carbon emission done by Germany in the year 2012. To begin with, China had the highest carbon emissions l discharge approximately 8100 metric tonnes whereas the United States America was the second most carbon emission contribute 5000 metric tonnes in the year 2012. In 2012, India was around the half went down carbon emission almost 2000 metric tonnes. Apart from that, in the same year, Russia had emmited CO2 roughly 2000 metric tonnes and Japan was the nearly about 1500 metric tonnes released CO2 for the trend. On the other hand, the emmison of carbon dioxide was roughly 1000 metric tonnes by the Germany and also noticed that it was the lowest in trend compared to other five countries in the year 2012.
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2012. To
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l discharge approximately 8100 metric tonnes whereas the United States America was the second most
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contribute 5000 metric tonnes in the
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2012. In 2012, India was around the half went down
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almost 2000 metric tonnes. Apart from that, in the same
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