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The table below gives information on computer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002

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The table explores the percentage of national consumer expenditure within diverse items of five countries which happened in 2002. Most of the customer likes to take food, drinks, and tobacco. On the opposite side of leisure, education which bought less number of consumers. Among the five countries, Turkey was in the highest position to expend plenty of amounts behind food, drinks, tobacco with 32. 14%. Otherwise, Spain spent low consumption with 1. 98% on leisure and education. In this sector, Turkey again expended a lot with 4. 35%. Another item of clothing and footwear where Italy consumed 9% which was more than others. However, Sweden spent less with 5. 40% compared to other countries. Rest item was food, drinks, tobacco where Turkey expended a lot with 32. 14%. On the other hand, Sweden spent less with 15. 77%. Finally, Turkey expended a plethora not only on food, drinks, tobacco but also leisure, education. On the other hand, Sweden consumed the lowest for food, drinks, tobacco and clothing, footwear.
The table explores the percentage of national consumer expenditure within diverse items of five countries which happened in 2002. Most of the customer likes to take
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. On the opposite side of leisure, education which
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less number of consumers.

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of amounts behind
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with 32. 14%.
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, Spain spent low consumption with 1. 98% on leisure and education. In this sector, Turkey again expended a lot with 4. 35%. Another item of clothing and footwear where Italy consumed 9% which was more than others.
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, Sweden spent less with 5. 40% compared to
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countries. Rest item was
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,
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tobacco
where Turkey expended a lot with 32. 14%. On the
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hand, Sweden spent less with 15. 77%.

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, Turkey expended a plethora not
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hand, Sweden consumed the lowest for
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IELTS academic The table below gives information on computer spending on different items in five different countries in 2002

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