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The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities. MV6a
The rendered table categorizes six cities as per their establishment date, distance traveled, annual proportion of passengers. Overall, it can be explicitly observed maximum passengers are carried by Tokyo, on contrary to that, Kyoto carries the minimum. In addition to that, London does not only cover the highest kilometers of routes but also has the oldest underground system, whilst, Kyoto and Los Angeles are the lowest, the latest respectively. With regards to the year of the establishment, London is the oldest followed by Paris. In 1927, Tokyo was opened. Subsequently, after half-century Washington DC and Kyoto were constructed, that is, 1976, and 1981. Lastly, after two decades Los Angeles was built. Turning to the distance covered, London, being the maximum then nearly half the kilometers routes were covered by Paris, namely, 199. Tokyo as well as Washinton DC covered more than 100 but less than 155, whereas Kyoto and Los Angeles only covered 11 and 28 respectively. At last annual passengers in a year, Tokyo received the maximum crowd, then Paris, and London. Washington DC in total, 144 million passengers noticed, which is three times more than Kyoto and Los Angeles.
The rendered table categorizes six cities as per their establishment date, distance traveled, annual proportion of
passengers
.
Overall
, it can be
explicitly
observed maximum
passengers
are carried
by Tokyo, on contrary to that, Kyoto carries the minimum.
In addition
to that, London does not
only
cover the highest kilometers of routes
but
also
has the oldest underground system, whilst, Kyoto and Los Angeles are the lowest, the latest
respectively
.

With regards to
the year of the establishment, London is the oldest followed by Paris. In 1927, Tokyo
was opened
.
Subsequently
, after half-century Washington DC and Kyoto
were constructed
,
that is
, 1976, and 1981.
Lastly
, after two decades Los Angeles
was built
.

Turning to the distance
covered
, London, being the maximum then
nearly
half the kilometers routes were
covered
by Paris,
namely
, 199. Tokyo
as well
as
Washinton
DC
covered
more than 100
but
less than 155, whereas Kyoto and Los Angeles
only
covered
11 and 28
respectively
.

At last annual
passengers
in a year, Tokyo received the maximum crowd, then Paris, and London. Washington DC in total, 144 million
passengers
noticed, which is three times more than Kyoto and Los Angeles.
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IELTS academic The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities.

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  American English
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191 words
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