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The graph shows that the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.

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The graph shows that the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. It has three categories; visitors staying on cruise ships, visitors staying on island, and total. Overall, it is clearly that total visitors of tourists visiting a Caribbean island number an increasing trend was seen in the graph. The total number of visitors was 1 millions in 2010, but in 2017, total visitors number was 3. 5 millions. Looking at the graph more closely, one can see that the number of visitors staying on cruise ships go down slightly in 2012, but overall grows steadily. From 2010 to 2015, the number of visitors staying in island was higher than the the others, however, the number of visitors staying on cruise ships was higher than the others.
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that the
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of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean
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island
between 2010 and 2017. It has three categories;
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visitors
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staying
on cruise ships,
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visitors
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staying
on
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island
, and total.

Overall
, it is
clearly
that total
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visitors
of tourists visiting a Caribbean
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island
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number
an increasing trend was
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seen
in the graph. The total
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number
of
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visitors
was 1 millions in 2010,
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but
in 2017, total
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visitors
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number
was 3. 5 millions.

Looking at the graph more
closely
, one can
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see
that the
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number
of
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visitors
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staying
on cruise ships go down
slightly
in 2012,
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but
overall
grows
steadily
. From 2010 to 2015, the
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number
of
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visitors
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staying
in
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island
was higher than
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others,
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, the
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visitors
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staying
on cruise ships was higher than the others.

IELTS academic The graph shows that the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.

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132 words
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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