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the layout of a university's sports centre now and how it will look after redevelopment

the layout of a university's sports centre now and how it will look after redevelopment 2eQM

The diagrams depict the present construction of a sports centre and plans for its renovation. From an overall perspective, it is readily apparent that there are plans to remove some places with additional facilities. At this time, the university’s main building is flanked by large outdoor courts which are located at the west and east of the facility. And the sports centre comprises a gym, a 25-meter-long pool and two outdoor courts apart from a basic seating area and a changing room. Looking at the plan diagram, the western courts will be removed in favour of a leisure pool larger in size than the current pool, which will itself remain unchanged during renovations. The entire main building will not undergo alterations including the changing rooms, reception and seating area. The only slight exception is that the gym on the northern end of the building will be lengthened eastwards and connect with two new adjoining dance studios. The large entrance area will not be impeded in any way but a new sports shop will open next to the westernmost changing room.

The diagrams depict the present construction of a sports Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
 and plans for its renovation. From an overall
 perspective, it is readily
 apparent that there are plans to remove This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 places with additional facilities.

At this time, the university’s main building is flanked
 by large outdoor courts which are located
 at the west and east of the facility. And the sports Possible spelling mistake. 'centre' is British English.center
centre
 comprises a gym, a 25-meter-long pool and two outdoor courts apart from a basic seating area and a changing room.

Looking at the plan diagram, the western courts will be removed
 in Possible spelling mistake. 'favour' is British English.favor
favour
 of a leisure pool A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.larger
larger in size
 than the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :contemporarymodern
current
 pool, which will itself remain unchanged during renovations. The entire main building will not undergo alterations including the changing rooms, reception and seating area. The This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 slight exception is that the gym on the northern This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of the building will be lengthened
 eastwards and connect with two new adjoining dance studios. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
 large entrance area will not be impeded
 in any way This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 a new sports shop will open next
 to the westernmost changing room. 