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The given chart illustrates the consumption of three types of nutrients taken by the average people in USA on a per day basis in whole day meal, these supplement can be unhealthy if consumed too much.

The given chart illustrates the consumption of three types of nutrients taken by the average people in USA on a per day basis in whole day meal, these supplement can be unhealthy if consumed too much. 1wL7
The given chart illustrates the consumption of three types of nutrients taken by the average people in USA on a per day basis in whole day meal, these supplement can be unhealthy if consumed too much. Overall, we can say that Sodium and saturated fat have mostly consumed consume in dinner and lunch, however intake of added sugar is most in added sugar. On the other hand, breakfast has least amount of intake in all of the mentioned nutrients. To begin with, intake of sodium in dinner and lunch with 43% and 29% respectively. For Saturated fat our main course meal (Lunch and dinner) constitutes total of 63%, whereas the percentage of added sugar dropped slightly to 19 % for lunch while dinner has 23% of added sugar intake. On the other hand, breakfast and lunch constitutes of 28 % intake of sodium with 14% each. Percentage of saturated fat consumption rose to 21% for snacks and 16% for breakfast. Snacks has 42% intake of added sugar which is highest among all day meal, with breakfast being the minimum intake of 16%
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chart illustrates the consumption of three types of nutrients taken by the average
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people
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in USA
on a per day basis in whole day meal, these supplement can be unhealthy if consumed too much.

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, we can say that Sodium and saturated
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dinner
and lunch,
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of
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added
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sugar
is most in
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added
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sugar
.
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,
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breakfast
has
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least
amount of
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intake
in
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all of the
mentioned nutrients.

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intake
of sodium in
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dinner
and lunch with 43% and 29%
respectively
. For Saturated
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fat
our main course meal (Lunch and
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dinner)
constitutes total of 63%, whereas the percentage of
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added
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sugar
dropped
slightly
to 19 % for lunch while
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dinner
has 23% of
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added
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sugar
intake.

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,
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breakfast
and lunch
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constitutes of
28 %
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intake
of sodium with 14% each. Percentage of saturated
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fat
consumption rose to 21% for snacks and 16% for
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breakfast
.
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Snacks has
42%
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intake
of
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added
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sugar
which is highest among all day meal, with
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breakfast
being the minimum
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intake
of 16%

IELTS academic The given chart illustrates the consumption of three types of nutrients taken by the average people in USA on a per day basis in whole day meal, these supplement can be unhealthy if consumed too much.

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