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the table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities

the table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities 76K5
The table shows data about the underground rail networks in six major cities. The table compares the six networks in terms of their age, size and the number of people who use them each year. It is clear that the three oldest underground systems are larger and serve significantly more passengers than the newer systems. The London underground is the oldest system, having opened in 1863. It is also the largest system, with 394 kilometres of route. The second largest system, in Paris, is only about half the size of the London underground, with 199 kilometres of route. However, it serves more people per year. While only third in terms of size, the Tokyo system is easily the most used, with 1927 million passengers per year. Of the three newer networks, the Washington DC underground is the most extensive, with 126 kilometres of route, compared to only 11 kilometres and 28 kilometres for the Kyoto and Los Angeles systems. The Los Angeles network is the newest, having opened in 2001, while the Kyoto network is the smallest and serves only 45 million passengers per year.
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data about the
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underground
rail
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networks
in six major cities.

The table compares the six
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networks
in terms of their age, size and the number of
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people
who
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use
them each year. It is
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clear
that the three oldest
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underground
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systems
are larger and serve
significantly
more passengers than the newer systems.

The London
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underground
is the oldest
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system
, having opened in 1863. It is
also
the largest
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system
, with 394
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kilometres
of route. The second largest
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system
, in Paris, is
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only
about half the size of the London
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underground
, with 199
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kilometres
of route.
However
, it serves more
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people
per year. While
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only
third in terms of size, the Tokyo
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system
is
easily
the most
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used
, with 1927 million passengers per year.

Of the three newer
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networks
, the Washington DC
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underground
is the most extensive, with 126
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kilometres
of route, compared to
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only
11
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kilometres
and 28
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kilometres
for the Kyoto and Los Angeles
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systems
. The Los Angeles
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network
is the newest, having opened in 2001, while the Kyoto
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network
is the smallest and serves
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only
45 million passengers per year.
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