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The following diagram shows how greenhouse gases trap energy from the Sun.

The following diagram shows how greenhouse gases trap energy from the Sun. KAq1
The diagram illustrates the way in which greenhouse gases are produced and how solar energy is trapped by these gases Overall, the process is a cycle starting with cacbon dioxide stemming from the activities of mankind. At the first stage, the fume emitting from means of transport is one of the common elements that contributes to the earth’s atmosphere. The engine of a car, plane, motorised boat or other vehicles release toxic substances. The pollutants also meet with extra carbon dioxide, evacuated from power plants or factories which burn fossil fuels, forming a clutter of man-made pollutants. The logs trees absorbing the man-produced carbon dioxide are caused by the marring deforestation. The second stage occures in the atmosphere, where a part of the energy received from the sun is reflected back to the outer space. Instead, the greenhouse gases trap the heat, warming up the environment.
The diagram illustrates the way in which greenhouse gases
are produced
and how solar energy
is trapped
by these gases

Overall
, the process is a cycle starting with
cacbon
dioxide stemming from the activities of mankind.

At the
first
stage, the fume emitting from means of transport is one of the common elements that contributes to the earth’s atmosphere. The engine of a car,
plane
,
motorised
boat or other vehicles release toxic substances. The pollutants
also
meet
with extra carbon dioxide, evacuated from power plants or factories which burn fossil fuels, forming a clutter of
man
-made pollutants.
The
logs
trees
absorbing the
man
-produced carbon dioxide
are caused
by the marring deforestation.

The
second stage
occures
in the atmosphere, where a part of the energy received from the sun
is reflected
back to the outer space.
Instead
, the greenhouse gases trap the heat, warming up the environment.
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IELTS academic The following diagram shows how greenhouse gases trap energy from the Sun.

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