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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The table below gives information about the situation of marriage and age from 1960 to 2000 in Australia. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The table below gives information about the situation of marriage and age from 1960 to 2000 in Australia. GxPo
The shown table illustrates the changes in the number of marriages performed by the government and religious leader together with the average age of bride and groom between 1960 and 2000 in Australia. Overall, it can be seen clearly that there was a fluctuation in the number of religion marriage. While civil marriage tended to increase sharply over the given period. In 1960, the number of religious wedding ceremony started with 25000 and this figure increased significantly to 50000 after 20 years before hitting the lowest point of 34000 at the end of the given year. Turning to civil marriage, there were 8000 civil marriage in 1960 which went up fivefold at 40000 in 2000. In addition, there was a similar trend in the marriageable age of both bride and groom. At the beginning of the period, the average age of bride was 21 while the figure for groom was 24. For the following of 40 year, the average age experienced a considerable growth, with 30 years of for bride and 32 years old for groom in 2000.
The shown table illustrates the
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changes
in the number of
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marriages
performed by the
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government
and religious leader together with the average
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age
of
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bride
and
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groom
between 1960 and 2000 in Australia.

Overall
, it can be
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seen
clearly
that there was a fluctuation in the number of religion
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marriage
.
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While
civil
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marriage
tended to increase
sharply
over the
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given
period.

In 1960, the number of religious wedding ceremony
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started
with 25000 and this figure increased
significantly
to 50000 after 20 years
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before
hitting the lowest point of 34000 at the
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end
of the
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given
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year
. Turning to civil
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marriage
, there were 8000 civil
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marriage
in 1960 which went up fivefold at 40000 in 2000.
In addition
, there was a similar trend in the marriageable
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age
of both
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bride
and
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groom
. At the beginning of the period, the average
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age
of
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bride
was 21 while the figure for
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groom
was 24. For the following of 40
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year
, the average
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age
experienced a considerable growth, with 30 years of for
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bride
and 32 years
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old
for
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groom
in 2000.
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IELTS academic The table below gives information about the situation of marriage and age from 1960 to 2000 in Australia.

Academic
  American English
3 paragraphs
178 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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