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The pie chart illustrates, the water consumption in Australia, whereas bar chart reveals the proprtion of water used in different activities by resident in Australia in year 2004.

The pie chart illustrates, the water consumption in Australia, whereas bar chart reveals the proprtion of water used in different activities by resident in Australia in year 2004. Gxno
The pie chart illustrates, the water consumption in Australia, whereas bar chart reveals the proprtion of water used in different activities by resident in Australia in year 2004. Overall, when we compare, it is evident that, maximum water is used by residential houses with respect to other areas like industries, government and business. It is even higher than the residential apartments. Additionally, residents use more than 1/4 th of water in bathroom and garden. Firstly, in 2004 slightly less than three quarter of water was used by both residents which consists of both residing in houses and appartments. Remaining one quarter of warter is used by business, government, industries and other organizations. On the other hand residents use one in ten proportion of water in kitchen, which is the least usage by them. Furthermore, double than that, they use fir washing clothes. Besides, 15% of water is used in toilet. Nevertheless, more than 25% of water is used in bathroom and garden by residents in 2004.
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consumption in Australia, whereas bar chart reveals the
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proprtion
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in
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activities by
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resident
in Australia in year 2004.

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, when we compare, it is evident that, maximum
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is
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by residential
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houses
with respect to other areas like industries,
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government
and business. It is even higher than the residential apartments.
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,
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residents
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more than 1/
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in bathroom and garden.

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three quarter
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was
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by both
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which consists of both residing in
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appartments
. Remaining one quarter of
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by business,
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government
, industries and other organizations.

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one in ten proportion of
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in kitchen, which is the least usage by them.
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,
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than that, they
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fir washing clothes.
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is
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in toilet.
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, more than 25% of
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is
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used
in bathroom and garden by
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residents
in 2004.
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IELTS academic The pie chart illustrates, the water consumption in Australia, whereas bar chart reveals the proprtion of water used in different activities by resident in Australia in year 2004.

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