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Number of girls in education per 100 boys in 1990 and 2000

Number of girls in education per 100 boys in 1990 and 2000 VabO
The bar charts provide information regarding the number of girls for every 100 boys in different education levels in developed and developing countries in 1990 and 2000 with the associated target for year 2005. Overall, there had always been more females enrolled in developed countries when contrasted with the numbers in developing countries. Additionally, there were more females than males in universities in developed countries. In developing countries, the number of girls declined as the education level gets higher. There were 87 females in primary education in 2000, while this number was smaller in secondary education where it was 82 and the lowest enrollment rate was in tertiary education where it was only 75. Meanwhile in developed countries, the participation of females in education seemed to be relatively high. For both school-level education the numbers were just under 100 in 1990 and 2000. However, in university-level there were more girls than boys. In 1990, 105 girls were enrolled and it was even higher in 2000 where the number was 112. This figure had already passed the goal of 100 female enrollment in 2005.
The bar charts provide information regarding the
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levels in
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and developing
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countries
in 1990 and 2000 with the associated target for year 2005.

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females
enrolled in
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developed
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countries
when contrasted with the
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in developing
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countries
.
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, there were more
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females
than males in universities in
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countries.

In developing
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, the
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declined as the
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level
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higher. There were 87
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females
in primary
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in 2000, while this
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was smaller in secondary
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where it was 82 and the lowest enrollment rate was in tertiary
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where it was
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, the participation of
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under 100 in 1990 and 2000.
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, in university-level there were more
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girls
than boys. In 1990, 105
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were enrolled
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was 112. This figure had already passed the goal of 100
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female
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