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The plans below show the layout of university's sports Center now and how it will look after redevelopment.

The plans below show the layout of university's sports Center now and how it will look after redevelopment. E8Br
The given maps illustrate the development of the sports Centre of the university in present and iin the future. Overall, the project will change in outdoor courts western side or Estenside and gym wich is located in Northern side. To present, the university sports centre is a rectangular building which has outdoor courts both at its East and west. In the main building, towards the left of the reception, there is changing room and juat nearly right side across the 25m pool, there is exists the seating facility. It also has a gym towards it's North. In future, the first noticeable change which is seen in the addition of a Leisure pool at the West, next to the changing room at South-West side and South Side additional a sports shop. Opposite, towards the East, another changing room is planned made smaller cafe. The outdoor court at the and will be transforming to a Sports Hall and towards and East two dance studios are planned. The next change, is the exanded of gym towards the East.
The
given
maps illustrate the development of the
sports
Centre
of the university in present and
iin
the future.
Overall
, the project will
change
in outdoor courts western side or
Estenside
and gym
wich
is located
in Northern side. To present, the university
sports
centre
is a rectangular building which has outdoor courts both at its East and west. In the main building, towards the
left
of the reception, there is changing room and
juat
nearly
right side across the
25m
pool, there is exists the seating facility. It
also
has a gym towards it's North.
In future
, the
first
noticeable
change
which is
seen
in the addition of a Leisure pool at the West,
next
to the changing room at South-West side and South Side additional a
sports
shop. Opposite, towards the East, another changing room
is planned
made smaller
cafe
. The outdoor court at the
and
will be transforming to a
Sports
Hall and towards and East two dance studios
are planned
. The
next
change
, is the
exanded
of gym towards the East.
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IELTS academic The plans below show the layout of university's sports Center now and how it will look after redevelopment.

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