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The table below gives information about the daily cost of water per person in five different countries

The table below gives information about the daily cost of water per person in five different countries 3A6kN
The table compares the amount people have to pay for their minimum daily water in five countries. It also shows the percentage of the average daily wage this represents in each place. First of all, we can see that Tanzania and Uganda have the highest daily water costs while the UK and US have the lowest. This means, for instance, that Tanzanians pay 6. 4 cents, whereas Americans pay a mere 0. 85 cents for the same amount of water. These differences are even greater when we consider the percentage of the average daily wage this cost represents. In both Tanzania and Uganda, the cost is significant, representing 5. 7% and 3. 2% respectively. In the UK and US, however, the cost is only a tiny fraction of the daily wage at 0. 013% and 0. 006%. And, despite the daily cost of water in Pakistan being similar to that in the UK, it represents as much as 1. 1% of the daily wage. Overall, the table shows that there are huge differences between the cost of water in the developing countries and the industrialised west.
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in five countries. It
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the percentage of the average
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wage this represents in each place.

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that Tanzania and Uganda have the highest
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while the UK and US have the lowest. This means,
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, that Tanzanians pay 6. 4 cents, whereas Americans pay a mere 0. 85 cents for the same amount of
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. These differences are even greater when we consider the percentage of the average
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wage this
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represents. In both Tanzania and Uganda, the
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is significant, representing 5. 7% and 3. 2%
respectively
. In the UK and US,
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wage at 0. 013% and 0. 006%. And, despite the
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in Pakistan being similar to that in the UK, it represents as much as 1. 1% of the
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developing countries
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IELTS academic The table below gives information about the daily cost of water per person in five different countries

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