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book sales by genre across time

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The given bar chart illustrates the number of book by genre which were sold from 2013 to 2015. Overall, romance genre was the most selling over three years, however mystery books was the less popular among readers compare to others genres. Having a closer look at the data of the bar chart, a great number of romance books were sold during three years and comprised around 1550 books. Whereas fantasy genre took the second place by popularity among genres and accounted for approximately 1400 books sold during 2013, 2014 and 2015. It is clearly seen from the presented data that such genres as thriller and science fiction were less common among read lovers, however the number of sold books of these genres made up around 1300 and 1350 copies accordingly. Furthermore, mystery genre was less popular and only 1000 books were sold during the period.
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, romance
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was the most selling over three years,
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mystery
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was the less popular among readers compare to others genres.

Having a closer look at the data of the bar chart, a great number of romance
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were sold
during three years and comprised around 1550
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. Whereas fantasy
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took the second place by popularity among genres and accounted for approximately 1400
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books
sold during 2013, 2014 and 2015.

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clearly
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from the presented data that such genres as thriller and science fiction were less common among read lovers,
however
the number of sold
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of these genres made up around 1300 and 1350 copies
accordingly
.
Furthermore
, mystery
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genre
was less popular and
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only
1000
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during the period.
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