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The two maps below show the changes in the town of Denham from 1986 to the present day.

The two maps below show the changes in the town of Denham from 1986 to the present day. rLNQk
The provided set of charts depicts alterations in the town named Denham between 1986 and the present day. Overall, it is apparent from the chart that the area has witnessed significant change. The town have been completely transformed with addition of road, retirement home and many more by the present times. However, most of the facilities are removed. Focusing in the 1986, there was the farmland just below post office and shops on the western part of a map. In the Northeast, there were farmland exactly next to the Primary school. A large house was located in the centre of the town surrounded by garden Close to Bridge, there were houses near a road that connects to bridge and runs from North to South. Moving on the current map, the huge change have been made to road which are connected to bridge. Plenty of house are constructed around that road. New square shaped road is built on the old road. Large house has been demolished by chaining it into a retirement home. The farmland, one in the bottom of left-hand corner and another in the top of right-hand corner have being destroyed. The most noticeable point are that the bridge, river stoke, post office and primary school are only the natural features which are untouched.
The provided set of charts depicts alterations in the town named
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Denham
between 1986 and the present day.
Overall
, it is apparent from the chart that the area has witnessed significant
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change
. The town have been completely transformed with addition of
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road
, retirement home and
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many
more by the present times.
However
, most of the facilities
are removed
.

Focusing in the 1986, there was the farmland
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just
below post office and shops on the western part of a map. In the Northeast, there were farmland exactly
next
to the Primary school. A large
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house
was located
in the
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centre
of the town surrounded by garden Close to
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Bridge
, there were
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houses
near a
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road
that connects to
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bridge
and runs from North to South.

Moving on the
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current
map, the huge
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change
have
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road
which
are connected
to
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bridge
.
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Plenty
of
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house
are constructed
around that
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road
. New square shaped
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road
is built
on the
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old
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road
. Large
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house
has
been demolished
by chaining it into a retirement home. The farmland, one in the bottom of
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left
-hand corner and another in the top of right-hand corner have being
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destroyed
. The most noticeable point are that the
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bridge
, river stoke, post office and primary school are
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only
the natural features which
are untouched
.
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IELTS academic The two maps below show the changes in the town of Denham from 1986 to the present day.

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