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The chart below shows the aid from six developed to developing countries from 2008-2010. Summarize the information

The chart below shows the aid from six developed to developing countries from 2008-2010. PgJdd
The given chart delineates the amount of the aid given by six developed countries the United States of America, Germany, The United Kingdom, Japan, Netherlands and Sweden to other developing nations in billion dollars during 2008 to 2010. As can be observed USA provided the highest amount of aid among all countries. On the other hand side, sweden's contribution in giving aids is the least, it almost hit rock bottom. In the year 2008, 2009 and 2010 respectively. Netherlands and Sweden was below 10 million dollars, yet in three years saw similar changes. America touched the peak by a quarter despite it, Germany, Britain and Japan were also major donars. Germans increased their aid over the years. UK showed fluctuation but end of the period a rise about 15 million presents in country. Japan also presented a fall around 10 million in 2009 although in 2010 an improvement in aid round about 11 million occured.
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chart delineates the amount of the
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by six
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developed countries
the United States of America, Germany, The United Kingdom, Japan, Netherlands and Sweden to other developing nations in
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dollars during 2008 to 2010. As can
be observed
USA provided the highest amount of
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aid
among all countries.
On the other hand
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sweden
's contribution in giving
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aids
is the least, it almost hit rock bottom. In the year 2008, 2009 and 2010
respectively
. Netherlands and Sweden was below 10
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million
dollars,
yet
in three years
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similar
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. America touched the peak by a quarter despite it, Germany, Britain and Japan were
also
major
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donars
. Germans increased their
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aid
over the years. UK
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fluctuation
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of the period a rise about 15
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presents in country. Japan
also
presented a fall around 10
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million
in 2009 although in 2010 an improvement in
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aid
round about 11
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the aid from six developed to developing countries from 2008-2010.

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