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The table below gives information about the average annual spending of university students in 3 different countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

The table data depicts the average yearly expenditure of college students in three different country ( country A, country B and country C) with five different categories. From the cursory glance it can be seen that country C total annual spending was three time less than country A and country B. As it can be observed from the table, that country A students had the highest total annual spending, which is consider as 5000 $ in US. In which the highest proportion of money 45 % were spent by country A students on accommodation. In contrast to this, on books and other miscellaneous thing students spent the least percentage of amount, 3% and 8% respectively. students spents similar proportion of cost 22% on both food and leisure categories. Furthermore, country B students spent almost similar percentage of amount from yearly spending on all categories, except books. In which students spent three time more 9% money on books than country A students. Country C students had 1500 $ in US the least amount of total expenditure. From this 36% the highest proportion of amount spent by students on Food. In compare to this, students spent 12% and 1% the least percentage of cost on leisure and other miscellaneous thing. On books and accommodation students spent nearly similar proportion of money, 21% and 30% respectively. overall, it can be seen from the table country C students had lowest amount of total annual spending, still students spent highest proportion of money on books than country A and country B.
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had the highest
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45 % were
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A
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three time more 9%
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IELTS academic The table below gives information about the average annual spending of university students in 3 different countries.

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256 words
6.0
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