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The bar chart illustrates the number of sales of various types of digital games world-wide during the period of 2000 to 2006.

The bar chart illustrates the number of sales of various types of digital games world-wide during the period of 2000 to 2006. Overall, handheld games reign the highest in all of the given period. Conversely, online games, mobile games and console games remained in the similar range with a considerable fluacuation. First, during the year 2000, there were only handheld games and console games. The following next two years met the brith of online games and mobile games respectively, both have less than half of the sales than that of the console. The rising trend of handheld games was steady, starting from 12 in 2000 and ended at 18 during 2006, with exponetial increases during 2002 and 2006, whereas others were dynamic. Console games met a continously slow decline until it was surpassed by both mobile and online game during 2005.
The bar chart illustrates the number of sales of various types of digital
games
world-wide during the period of 2000 to 2006.

Overall
, handheld
games
reign the highest in
all of the
given
period.
Conversely
, online
games
, mobile
games
and console
games
remained in the similar range with a considerable
fluacuation
.

First
, during the year 2000, there were
only
handheld
games
and console
games
. The following
next
two years met the
brith
of online
games
and mobile
games
respectively
, both have less than half of the sales than that of the console.

The rising trend of handheld
games
was steady, starting from 12 in 2000 and ended at 18 during 2006, with
exponetial
increases during 2002 and 2006, whereas others were dynamic. Console
games
met a
continously
slow decline until it
was surpassed
by both mobile and online game during 2005.
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IELTS academic The bar chart illustrates the number of sales of various types of digital games world-wide during the period of 2000 to 2006.

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