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outdoors or indoors sports

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The place you exercise is probably one of the most important things about it, and it all depends on the person, but we can see different arguments about it. There are people that thinks doing sport outdoors is much better than inside, specially because we spend a lot of time inside, working, studying… So it is more enjoyable ñ when you are running, climbing or cycling while feeling the air in your face instead of indoors, not reaching any place when you move, and even having to pay. From the other point of view we have that in the inside is better due to the fact that the weather is a big problem, if it is raining, you could fall down and, if it is extremely hot you could be tired before than normal, so it has to be perfect. But on the inside whenever you want you can go and practise sport because it doesn’t matter how is the weather and it is safer. I personally prefer doing sports outdoors, I think it is because I’m tired of being all the time inside the classroom or in my house studying, so I rather going out.
The place you exercise is
probably
one of the most
important
things about it, and it all depends on the person,
but
we can
see
different
arguments about it.

There are
people
that
thinks
doing sport outdoors is much better than
inside
,
specially
because
we spend
a lot of
time
inside
, working, studying…
So
it is more enjoyable ñ when you are running, climbing or cycling while feeling the air in your face
instead
of indoors, not reaching any place when you
move
, and even having to pay.

From the other point of view we have that in the
inside
is better due to the fact that the weather is a
big
problem, if it is raining, you could fall down and, if it is
extremely
hot you could
be tired
before
than normal,
so
it
has to
be perfect.
But
on the
inside
whenever you want you can go and
practise
sport
because
it doesn’t matter how is the weather and it is safer.

I
personally
prefer doing sports outdoors, I
think
it is
because
I’m tired of being all the time
inside
the classroom or in my
house
studying,
so
I
rather
going out.
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IELTS academic outdoors or indoors sports

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
196 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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