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The table below gives information about car ownership according to the households in Great Britain

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The line graph illustrates the ownership of a car according to the family in the United Kingdom. Overall, it can be seen that in 1961 the one who does not have a car was maximum at 70. While the one who has 2+ cars at 10. After 50 years the trend goes opposite and one who had 2+ cars was at highest and who had not any car was at least. Looking at the graph in detail the one who had not any car was at 70 in 1961. The trend of no car plummeted to 10 in 2001. In 1961 the one who has one car stood at 30. It was increased gradually to the year 1971 after that the trend stabled at 40. Lastly, the one who had 2+ cars stood at 10 in 1961. The trend of buying 2+ cars increased gradually throughout the given period. In 2001 it was 50 households who have 2+ cars.
The line graph illustrates the ownership of a
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car
according to the family in the United Kingdom.

Overall
, it can be
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seen
that in 1961 the one
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who
does not have a
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car
was maximum at 70.
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While
the one
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who
has 2+
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cars
at 10. After 50 years the
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trend
goes opposite and one
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who
had 2+
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cars
was at highest and
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who
had not any
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car
was at least.

Looking at the graph in detail the one
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who
had not any
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car
was at 70 in 1961. The
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trend
of no
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car
plummeted to 10 in 2001.

In 1961 the one
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who
has one
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car
stood at 30. It
was increased
gradually
to the year 1971 after that the
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trend
stabled at 40.

Lastly
, the one
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who
had 2+
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cars
stood at 10 in 1961. The
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trend
of buying 2+
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cars
increased
gradually
throughout the
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given
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2001 it
was 50 households
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who
have 2+
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cars
.
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IELTS academic The table below gives information about car ownership according to the households in Great Britain

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6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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