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The table below provides data relating to annual weather statistics in four major cities. The table compares the four cities in terms of overall yearly rainfalls, snowfalls as well as annual temperature scale. The yearly temperature range is quite similar between both Casablanca and Paris, such that their ranging falls between (9 – 25 degrees Celsius and 9-35 degrees Celsius) respectively. However, in terms of annual rainfall, Paris has a total of 700mm which is remarkably higher than that in Casablanca which marks 26mm. Snowfall records in Casablanca are null, but they are accounted to 10mm in Paris. Both Edinburgh and Helsinki share a close temperature ranging, (5-15 degrees Celsius and -10 to +18 degrees Celsius) respectively. They are both almost equal in terms of annual rainfall, with a slight difference of 50 mm. Helsinki holds the highest record for annual snowfall which is 450mm, and it is significantly higher than that in Edinburgh.

The table below provides data relating to annual weather statistics in four major cities.

The table compares the four cities in terms of overall
 yearly rainfalls, snowfalls as well
 as annual temperature scale.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
The
 yearly temperature range is quite similar between both Casablanca and Paris, such that their ranging falls between (9 – 25 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtermstrengthseverityratepointgrade
degrees
 Celsius and 9-35 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtermstrengthseverityratepointgrade
degrees
 Celsius) respectively
. However
, in terms of annual rainfall, Paris has a total of Insert a space between the numerical value and the unit symbol "700 mm"700 mm
700mm
 which is remarkably
 higher than that in Casablanca which marks Insert a space between the numerical value and the unit symbol "26 mm"26 mm
26mm
. Snowfall records in Casablanca are null, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 they are accounted
 to Insert a space between the numerical value and the unit symbol "10 mm"10 mm
10mm
 in Paris.

Both Edinburgh and Helsinki share a close temperature ranging, (5-15 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtermstrengthseverityratepointgrade
degrees
 Celsius and -10 to +18 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtermstrengthseverityratepointgrade
degrees
 Celsius) respectively
. They are both almost equal in terms of annual rainfall, with a slight difference of 50 mm. Helsinki holds the highest record for annual snowfall which is Insert a space between the numerical value and the unit symbol "450 mm"450 mm
450mm
, and it is significantly
 higher than that in Edinburgh. 