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The graph show the consumption of fast food in UK per week from 1970 to 1990. Summarise the report and make comparison where relevant

The graph show the consumption of fast food in UK per week from 1970 to 1990. Summarise the report and make comparison where relevant 6m0Vr
The charts give the information about the number of fast foods was consumed in UK in the period of 20 years from 1970 to 1990. Overall, there was a growth considerable in fish & chips meanwhile the consumption of pizza decreased significantly. In the half of the period, Pizza was consumed 300 grams, while fish & chips and hamburger devoured about 100 gram and 50 gram respectively. Over the following 10 years, the figure for ones rose by 50 grams but consuming in pizza fall to 100 grams in 1980. From 1980 to 1990, despite a period of similarity before, from 1980, the figure for fish, chips were upward fastly and achieved 500 grams in 1990. By contrast, pizza’s consumption decreased gradually and remained the stability during that time. In 1990, fish, chip became the most popular fast food in UK, following by hamburger and pizza which was 300 grams and 200 grams in turn.
The charts give the information about the number of
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foods
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in UK in the period of 20 years from 1970 to 1990.
Overall
, there was a growth considerable in fish & chips meanwhile the consumption of pizza decreased
significantly
.

In the half of the period, Pizza
was consumed
300
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grams
, while fish & chips and hamburger devoured about 100
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and 50
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gram
respectively
. Over the following 10 years, the figure for
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rose by 50
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consuming in pizza fall to 100
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grams
in 1980.

From 1980 to 1990, despite a period of similarity
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, from 1980, the figure for fish, chips were upward
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fastly
and achieved 500
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grams
in 1990. By contrast, pizza’s consumption decreased
gradually
and remained the stability during that time. In 1990, fish,
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chip
became the most popular
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fast
food in UK, following by hamburger and pizza which was 300
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and 200
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in turn.
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IELTS academic The graph show the consumption of fast food in UK per week from 1970 to 1990. Summarise the report and make comparison where relevant

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