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The bar chart illustrates transport preference for youth in term of car, motorcycle and bike cycle in United Kingdom United States France and Italy. The data is calibrated in percentage. From the bar chart, it is evident that, In United Kingdom and United State travel in car at 50 percentage. 30 % young generation prefer to ride bicycle in the United Kingdom. Additionally, 12 % young travel in motorcycle in the United Kingdom France and Italy. Moving further 48% young people factor in bicycle in France as compared to Italy which showed only 12%. Moreover, young generation like to travel in car at 73%. Italy 40% people travel in car. Overall, it is clear that, the majority of people like to travel in car. The France people prefer to ride bicycle. All countries choose least common option in motorcycle.
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at 50 percentage. 30 %
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factor in bicycle in France as compared to Italy which
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at 73%. Italy 40%
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Overall
, it is
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. The France
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prefer to ride bicycle. All countries choose
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