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The table below give information about sales of fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries

The table below give information about sales of fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries 0AMGl
It is clear that the proportion of coffee in UK increases over the period given from 1. 5 euros to 20 euros. And Switzerland is predicted to see the second significant rise in coffee and it doubled in 2004. While Denmark and Belgium slowly escalated approximately 0. 5m individually former remenisced durable with 0. 2 m in five years The second table demonstrated that UK had the highest banana sales in both years abruptly trembled from 15 million euros to 47 million euros. Switzerland get 5. 5 million euros during five years. It was little contrast between the quantity of Debmark and Belgium( almost 0. 3 million euros) respectively and hence, Sweden spanned the list level in both tables virtually about 1 millon euros throughout five years.
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the second significant rise in coffee and it doubled in 2004.

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euros to 47
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Debmark
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IELTS academic The table below give information about sales of fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in 1999 and 2004 in five European countries

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