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The chart below gives attendance figures for grandville stadium from 2017, which are projected through 2030 after a major improvement project. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below gives attendance figures for grandville stadium from 2017, which are projected through 2030 after a major improvement project. 2b6mA
This bar graph demonstrates the projected annual attendance for Grandville Stadium after holding a major improvement project in 2019. The forecasted attendance was for the theater, sporting events, and concerts for the years 2017, 2020, and 2030. In general, sporting events had the highest projected attendance with more than 150000 annual attendees in 2020 and 2030 as shown on the Y-axis. In contrast, the theater had the least. Over the years, in all event types the attendees were totally increasing. While comparing 2017 and 2020, all event types attendees had a similar stable increasement. On the other hand, 2030 was different; the sporting events attendees continue increasing smoothly, but the theater and concerts had a dramatically projected attendance jump. To sum up, after doing some improvements in 2019 the predicted attendance number increased in all events as shown. The highest attendance improvement take place in concerts jump in 2030, while the lowest one was with the theater.
This bar graph demonstrates the projected annual
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Grandville
Stadium after holding a major improvement project in 2019. The forecasted
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attendance
was for the
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theater
, sporting
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events
, and concerts for the years 2017, 2020, and 2030.

In general
, sporting
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events
had the highest projected
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attendance
with more than 150000 annual
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attendees
in 2020 and 2030 as shown on the Y-axis.
In contrast
, the
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theater
had the least. Over the years, in all
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event
types the
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attendees
were
totally
increasing. While comparing 2017 and 2020, all
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event
types
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attendees
had a similar stable
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increasement
.
On the other hand
, 2030 was
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different
; the sporting
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events
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attendees
continue increasing
smoothly
,
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but
the
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theater
and concerts had a
dramatically
projected
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attendance
jump.

To sum up, after doing
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some
improvements in 2019 the predicted
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attendance
number increased in all
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events
as shown. The highest
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attendance
improvement take place in concerts jump in 2030, while the lowest one was with the
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theater
.
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IELTS academic The chart below gives attendance figures for grandville stadium from 2017, which are projected through 2030 after a major improvement project.

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