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The chart below gives attendance figures for grandville stadium from 2017, which are projected through 2030 after a major improvement project. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below gives attendance figures for grandville stadium from 2017, which are projected through 2030 after a major improvement project. kYblO
The bar graph demonstrates the number of annual attendances to the Grandville Stadium for 2017. In addition to the forecasted number of attendances for 2020 and 2030 after holding major improvement project in 2019. In general, the attendance has recorded and projected for three types of events; the theater, sporting events, and concerts. All events had an increasingly trend for attendees. However, the sporting events had the highest records in 2017 which is approximately around 150 thousand. In contrast with the theater which has the lowest attendance number, as shown on the y-axis. Among the increasingly pattern theme, sporting events was rising smoothly among the years while other theater and concerts events had a high dramatic jump in 2030. Besides the dramatic jump in 2030 the sporting event still had the highest annual attendance number. The sum of both theater and concert attendance number will approximately equals the sporting events attendance for 2030 as shown. By contrast, the enhancement program will increase the sporting event attendees by about 10 thousand in 13 years. However, the theater and concerts will have more than 100 thousand increasement in the same period of time.
The bar graph demonstrates the
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number
of annual
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attendances
to the
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Grandville
Stadium for 2017.
In addition
to the forecasted
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number
of
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attendances
for 2020 and 2030 after holding major improvement project in 2019.

In general
, the
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attendance
has recorded and projected for three types of
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events
; the
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theater
, sporting
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events
, and
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concerts
. All
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events
had an
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increasingly trend
for attendees.
However
, the sporting
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events
had the highest records in 2017 which is approximately around 150 thousand.
In contrast
with the
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theater
which has the lowest
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attendance
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number
, as shown on the y-axis.

Among the
increasingly
pattern theme, sporting
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events
was rising
smoothly
among the years while other
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theater
and
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concerts
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events
had a high dramatic jump in 2030.
Besides
the dramatic jump in 2030 the sporting
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event
still
had the highest annual
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attendance
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number
. The sum of both
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theater
and
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concert
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attendance
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number
will approximately
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equals
the sporting
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events
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attendance
for 2030 as shown.

By contrast, the enhancement program will increase the sporting
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event
attendees by about 10 thousand in 13 years.
However
, the
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theater
and
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concerts
will have more than 100 thousand
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increasement
in the same period of time.

IELTS academic The chart below gives attendance figures for grandville stadium from 2017, which are projected through 2030 after a major improvement project.

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