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The table below describes victims by age group and offence category in Venezuela, 1999.

The table below describes victims by age group and offence category in Venezuela, 1999. WyGab
The table highlights a description of ages of people succumbed to various crimes in Venezuela in 1999. Overal, the highest crime rate was accounted by robberry, which highly affected all age groups. Kidnapping was averagely recorded as it was experienced mostly by under 14. Middle aged people of 25 to 44 years were never affected by negligence. The lowest number of crimes encountered was due to negligence. The highest offence committed in Venezuela was due to robbery, which affected people between the lower to medium age (15-24 and 25-44 years), at 4558 and 3312 respectively. The average number of crime was due to kidnapping, it accounted for a total of 233 cases, with children between 0-14 years being victims. Blackmailing was popular for middle aged people, as it was 89; with children below 14 being the least attacked with a record of 4cases. Noone between the age of 25 to 44years suffered due to negligence, while children below 14 years were highly victims. Niglegence is also the least of all five crimes committed, at 54 total cases. Middle aged people succumbed to murder as they recorded the highest number at 72 out of the total number of 162 which is almost half of the crime. Another noticeable feature is cases murder trippled that of negligence, while, robberry had the highest recorded cases. Kidnapping and blackmail were average crimes. The middle aged group was highly affected by all crimes with an exception of negligence. Advanced age group of 65 plus was the least affected by all crimes, whilst 15 to 24 years were moderately affected by all crimes except for robbery which was higher.
The table highlights a description of
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ages
of
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people
succumbed to various
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crimes
in Venezuela in 1999.

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Overal
, the highest
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crime
rate
was accounted
by
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robberry
, which
highly
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affected
all
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age
groups. Kidnapping was
averagely
recorded as it
was experienced
mostly
by under 14.
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Middle
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aged
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people
of 25 to 44 years were never
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affected
by
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negligence
. The lowest
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number
of
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crimes
encountered was
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due
to negligence.

The highest
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offence
committed in Venezuela was
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due
to robbery, which
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affected
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people
between the lower to medium
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age
(15-24 and 25-44 years), at 4558 and 3312
respectively
.
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The
average
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number
of
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crime
was
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due
to kidnapping, it accounted for a total of 233 cases, with children between 0-14 years being victims.

Blackmailing was popular for
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middle
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aged
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people
, as it was 89; with children below 14 being the least attacked with a record of 4cases.
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Noone
between the
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age
of 25 to 44years suffered
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due
to
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negligence
, while children below 14 years were
highly
victims.
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Niglegence
is
also
the least of all five
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crimes
committed, at 54 total cases.
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Middle
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aged
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people
succumbed to murder as they recorded the highest
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number
at 72 out of the total
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number
of 162 which is almost half of the crime.

Another noticeable feature is cases murder
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trippled
that of
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negligence
, while,
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robberry
had the highest recorded cases. Kidnapping and blackmail were average
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crimes
. The
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middle
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aged
group was
highly
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affected
by all
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crimes
with an
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exception of
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negligence
. Advanced
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age
group of 65 plus was the least
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affected
by all
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crimes
, whilst 15 to 24 years were
moderately
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affected
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crimes
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except for
robbery which was higher.
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