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The table below describes the number of people (in million) who went for international travel in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005

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The table depicts the information regarding the how many people went for international travel from the different five countries during the period of 1990 to 2005. Focusing on the detail, is can be noted that in the year of 1990 the most of the people from the Europe travel abroad as compered with others, which was 280. 2 millions. Followed by next 15 years this number was escalated dramatically and in the end of period it stood at 400. 2 millions. similarly, in case of Asia and the pacific where number of tourists were sored significantly from 60. 2 millions in 1990 to 135 millions in 2005. Furthermore, in other regions proportion of it was increased gradually. Although more people form the Africa preferred to travel than Middle East in mentioned period; after 1990 there was an inclined trend in both the countries for number of travelers and in 2005 these two reported for 28. 7 millions and 15. 8 millions respectively. Also, for America proportion was surged from 1990 to 2000 by nearly 28 millions but in 2005 it was plummeted slightly to 113. 2 millions. Overall, it can be inferred from that in total numbers for abroad travelers were elevated and through-out the period Europe had the highest number for it.
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