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The table below describes the number of employees and factories in England and Wales from 1851 to 1901.

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The table represents the number of working employees and factories in different countries over a period of fifty years. Overall, The number of men working in factories were decreased sharply as well as, the count of working women in the industries were dropped substantially. The total working men were declined sharply as related to beginning of the period where in 1851, They were 287, 000 but, after the coming decades, it was reduced 131, 800, 80, 123, 76, 132 in 1861, 1871, 1881 respectively. But, at ending of period it was reported that 50% the workforce is declined, as it is compared to previous decade. The total women working in factories were decreased to 30, 000 in 1901 as it compared to the starting of the period. From 1871, 1881 and 1891, The women workforce is declined significantly with a percentage of 20 % within a decade, While around 30, 000 female workers were decreased in 1861 as it related to 1851.
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employees and factories in
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of fifty years.

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men
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working
in factories
were decreased
sharply
as well
as, the count of
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working
women in the industries
were dropped
substantially
.

The total
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working
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men
were declined
sharply
as related to beginning of the
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period
where in 1851, They were 287, 000
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but
, after the coming decades, it was
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reduced
131, 800, 80, 123, 76, 132 in 1861, 1871, 1881
respectively
.
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But
, at ending of
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period
it
was reported
that 50% the workforce
is declined
, as it
is compared
to previous decade.

The total women
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working
in factories
were decreased
to 30, 000 in 1901 as it compared to the starting of the
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period
. From 1871, 1881 and 1891, The women workforce
is declined
significantly
with a percentage of 20 % within a decade, While around 30, 000 female workers
were decreased
in 1861 as it related to 1851.
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IELTS academic The table below describes the number of employees and factories in England and Wales from 1851 to 1901.

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