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The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011. yy33
The given bar chart illustrates the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales from 1918 to 2011. Overall, from 1918-1961 households in rented accommodation were more. In contrast, from 1971-2011 rented accommodation was more, and percentage of both rented and owned households were same in 1971. In the case of owned accommodation, the percentage was least (21%) in 1918, which kept on increasing and reached around 69% in 2001. Between 1939 and 1953, the percentage was the same that is 31%. In 1961, 1971, 1981 and 1991 the proportions were 41%, 50%, 60% and 68% respectively. On the other hand, the percentage of rented accommodation was highest(79%) in 1918. The rented accommodation reached the lowest in 2001 around 31%. Also, in 1971 both the owned and rented accommodation were in equal proportion that is 50-50. In 2011, rented accommodation was increased slightly by approximately 5%.
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of households in
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and rented
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accommodation
in England and Wales from 1918 to 2011.

Overall
, from 1918-1961 households in rented
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were more.
In contrast
, from 1971-2011 rented
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accommodation
was more, and
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percentage
of both rented and
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owned
households were same in 1971.

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owned
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accommodation
, the
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was least (21%) in 1918, which
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kept
on increasing and reached around 69% in 2001. Between 1939 and 1953, the
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was the same
that is
31%. In 1961, 1971, 1981 and 1991 the proportions were 41%, 50%, 60% and 68%
respectively
.

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, the
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percentage
of rented
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accommodation
was highest(79%) in 1918. The rented
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accommodation
reached the lowest in 2001 around 31%.
Also
, in 1971 both the
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owned
and rented
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accommodation
were in equal proportion
that is
50-50. In 2011, rented
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accommodation
was increased
slightly
by approximately 5%.
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the percentage of households in owned and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011.

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