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The chart below the chart below show the percentage of households in on and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011

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The report reveals the information regarding the percentage of household owned and rented accommodation in wales and England between 1980 and 2011. Overall the present of households in owned follow the increase but in a last year it decline. moreover, in the 1971 owned and rented households at same level. however, the percentage of rented accomodation follow the decrease. In 1918 the proportion of households in owned Accommodation 2o% which was slowly incline from 20 % to 50%. in year 1971 the percentage of on household as and rented house holders at 50%. while it reached at peak point on 70% in year 2001. which fallen down once again and noted near tow third in given last year 2011.
The report reveals the information regarding the percentage of
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and rented accommodation in wales and England between 1980 and 2011.
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Accommodation 2o% which was
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in
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1971 the percentage of on
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as and rented
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holders at 50%.
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2001.
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IELTS academic The chart below the chart below show the percentage of households in on and rented accommodation in England and Wales between 1918 and 2011

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