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The chart below shows the number of girls per 100 boys enrolled in different levels of school education. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. Writing Task 1

The chart below shows the number of girls per 100 boys enrolled in different levels of school education. 7g12
The bar chart compares the number of girls per 100 boys, who took admission to three levels of education( primary, secondary and tertiary) in developing and developed countries in the year 1990 and 1998. Overall, except for tertiary education in developed countries in all the other forms of education, the number of female students is below the target level. In regard to primary education, in 1990, 83 and 95 girls studied in developing and developed countries respectively. Whereas, in 1998 developing counties showed slight progress with 4 female students enrolled, while in developed countries it was one. The highest discrepancy was seen in secondary education of developing countries where the count of female students increased from 72 in 1990 to 82 in 1998. On the other hand, developed countries did not show much progress. However, developed countries reached more than their target level in the form of tertiary education with 105 girl students in 1990 and 112 in 1998. In contrast, developing countries had the least count of female students compared to primary and secondary education with 66 students in 1990 and 75 in 1995.
The bar chart compares the number of girls per 100 boys, who took admission to three levels of education
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primary, secondary and tertiary) in
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developing
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developed
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countries
in the year 1990 and 1998.
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except for
tertiary
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education
in
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developed
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countries
in all the other forms of
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education
, the number of
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female
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students
is below the target level. In regard to primary
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education
, in 1990, 83 and 95 girls studied in
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developing
and
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developed
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countries
respectively
. Whereas, in 1998
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developing
counties
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showed
slight progress with 4
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female
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students
enrolled, while in
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developed
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countries
it was one. The highest discrepancy was
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seen
in secondary
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education
of
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developing
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countries
where the count of
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female
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students
increased from 72 in 1990 to 82 in 1998.
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,
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developed
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countries
did not
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show
much progress.
However
,
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developed
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countries
reached more than their target level in the form of tertiary
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education
with 105 girl
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students
in 1990 and 112 in 1998.
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,
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developing
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countries
had the least count of
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female
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students
compared to primary and secondary
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education
with 66
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students
in 1990 and 75 in 1995.

IELTS academic The chart below shows the number of girls per 100 boys enrolled in different levels of school education.

Academic
  American English
1 paragraphs
185 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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