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The table compares the attendance and total earnings of various sport games in a country, and the pie chart shows different sources from which ice hockey matches gain their revenue. According to the table, baseball games have the highest number of audience, which is around 77 millions people, yet, their total revenue only ranks second. Despite having only 17 million people show up at the events, football matches earn the biggest profit among all sports at 13 billion dollars, which is 3 billion dollars higher than the earnings of baseball. Basketball and ice hockey both have 22 million people in attendance, plus, they earn 5 and 4 billion dollars respectively. It can be inferred from the pie chart that ice hockey games earn almost half of their total profit by selling tickets. TV broadcasting and concessions only accounted for 19 percent and 22 percent of the revenue, respectively. Nevertheless, sponsorship pays a significant amount of money for the games and it is responsible for 13 percent of the general income. Overall, baseball games have the highest attendance whereas football matches gain the most revenue. A large proportion of ice hockey’s profit comes from tickets.
The table compares the attendance and total earnings of various sport
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in a country, and the pie chart
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sources from which ice hockey matches gain their revenue.

According to the table, baseball
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have the highest number of audience, which is around 77 millions
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,
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ranks second. Despite having
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17 million
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, football matches earn the biggest profit among all sports at 13 billion dollars, which is 3 billion dollars higher than the earnings of baseball. Basketball and ice hockey both have 22 million
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people
in attendance, plus, they earn 5 and 4 billion dollars
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earn almost half of their total profit by selling tickets. TV broadcasting and concessions
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accounted for 19 percent and 22 percent of the revenue,
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games
and it is responsible for 13 percent of the general income.

Overall
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have the highest attendance whereas football matches gain the most revenue. A large proportion of ice hockey’s profit
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comes
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