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the proportion of different types of vehicle using a major road bridge in the UK

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The provided figures highlight the percentages of various types of vehicles that used a major bridge road in the UK in the years 1965, 1985 and 2005. According to the diagram, in 1965, 47% of people, nearly half the population, used private cars to get around. This number increased to 55% in 1985 and reached 74% in 2005, causing serious environmental problems such as Air pollution and Heavy traffic. The use of recreational motors has also had a 5% increase which has expanded the possibility and risk of having an accident. In the years between 1965 and 1985, Lorries and other commercial vehicles' usage had a 6% growth, From 20% to 26%, due to economical problems. However, since 1985-2005 this number has dropped to 12%. On the contrary, The use of public transport vehicles has unfortunately decreased from 29% to 5% in only 40 years. Overall, Private cars have become the most used type of transportation.
The provided figures highlight the percentages of various types of vehicles that
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a major bridge road in the UK in the years 1965, 1985 and 2005.

According to the diagram, in 1965, 47% of
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people
,
nearly
half the population,
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used
private cars to
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get
around. This number increased to 55% in 1985 and reached 74% in 2005, causing serious environmental problems such as Air pollution and Heavy traffic. The
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use
of recreational motors has
also
had a 5% increase which has expanded the possibility and
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risk
of having an accident.

In the years between 1965 and 1985, Lorries and other commercial vehicles' usage had a 6% growth, From 20% to 26%, due to
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economical
problems.
However
, since 1985-2005 this number has dropped to 12%.

On the contrary
, The
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use
of public transport vehicles has unfortunately decreased from 29% to 5% in
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only
40 years.

Overall
, Private cars have become the most
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used
type of transportation.
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