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the proportion of the USA main sources of energy in 1980 and 1990.

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The given pie charts illustrate the proportion of the USA main sources of energy in 1980 and 1990. The general overview here is that oil is the majority of the main sources of energy in USA in both given years. As I can be seen that, the highest amount of main sources of energy was occupied by the oil with 42% in 1980. there was a dramatic decrease of 9% to 33% in 1990, which still was the most popular main sources of energy in USA. Similarly, the number of natural gas indicated a decline of 1% from 26% to 25% throughout the period. Nevertheless, the number of the coal and nuclear power rose steadily by 5% from 22% and 5% to 27% and 10% respectively. It was interesting to note that there was a period of stability at 5% in the number of the hydroelectric power over the period observed.
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