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The table above shows data on the demographics of four nations. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The table above shows data on the demographics of four nations. pPw2
The table compares the demographical statistics of five different nations which are China, Russia, the USA and the UK in three categories- population, GDP and the average life expectancy of their citizens. Overall, China exceeds the other countries significantly in terms of population while the USA and the UK lead the statistics in GDP and mortality rate respectively. As mentioned, IN the population category, China has a population of 1. 5 billion people approximately followed by the USA and Russia. The UK holds last with 64 million people. on the other hand, China comes last in terms of GDP per capita at 7000 UD dollars approximately while USA comes first at 53000 US dollars. This is followed by the UK and Russia respectively. In the last category of average life expectancy, it is the UK that hold first position among the nations while China comes second at 81. 5 and 75. 2 years respectively. This is followed by Russia and the USA with 72. 3 and 69. 2 years respectively.
The table compares the
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demographical
statistics of five
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nations which are China, Russia, the USA and the UK in three categories-
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population
, GDP and the average life expectancy of their citizens.

Overall
, China exceeds the other countries
significantly
in terms of
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population
while the USA and the UK lead the statistics in GDP and mortality rate
respectively
.

As mentioned, IN the
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population
category, China has a
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population
of 1. 5 billion
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people
approximately followed by the USA and Russia. The UK holds last with 64 million
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people
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on
the other hand, China
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comes
last in terms of GDP per capita at 7000
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dollars approximately
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while USA
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comes
first
at 53000 US dollars. This
is followed
by the UK and Russia
respectively
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In the last category of average life expectancy, it is the UK that hold
first
position among the nations while China
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comes
second at 81. 5 and 75. 2 years
respectively
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by Russia and the USA with 72. 3 and 69. 2 years
respectively
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